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Electrifying

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Electrifying

It’s getting darker outside,
But this moment with you cradles me;
In your arms the problems of my world dissipate,
And my sigh is your cue to come closer,
So that the rough skin of your cheek grazes mine.

I chuckle oh so faintly.

Slowly, your musky scent spirals around me,
Blending with the humid air as my eyes flutter,
Responding to your dripping hair mopping my forehead,
Yet it darts away, leaving me craving, shivering,
My cracked lips parting, dehydrated, wanting more of you.

I smile into your ear.

The thunder rolls in, the two of us still lying against
The old oak tree in your uncle’s hidden backyard,
But the looming downpour doesn’t scare us away,
And your nose nudges my head, approving our thoughts
Just as the heavens roar and the leaves all rustle irritably.

I press my wet palm into the prickly ground.

At once the endless rain catapults onto our bodies as we
Struggle to escape the harsh whisper of nature.
Yet as the earth engulfs us in its raging storm,
You grab my arm, vacuuming my body into your
Every curve, holding me tightly against the soaked tree as

I gasp.

Your lips sip the raindrops rippling down my collarbone,
Static begins buzzing in all of my veins,
My fingers clutch the drenched locks of your dark hair,
And in all but a few seconds, I am lifted up towards the ominous sky,
In your sizzling arms… I feel the sparks fly.
meh... I tried. I don't know if I like this one too much... lol it just doesn't sit well with me... but I'm tired and will just leave it as it is! :)

For inspiration I listened to the most electrifying/romantic song I could think of at the moment...

Lifehouse: Everything

take a listen! and just... listen... :heart:
always gives me shivers!
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Tlovespugs's avatar
OMG I DON'T EVEN NO WHAT TO SAY AT THIS IT IS..... IM SPECHLESS AT HOW AMAZING IT IS